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Arthur McNamee's avatar

I felt like I was in the fight with Jackson the whole time. Great !

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Alison Bull's avatar

Thank you, Arthur! Glad you enjoyed it and I’m happy to have you as a new reader 💖📚

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Jim J Wilsky's avatar

Wow Alison. Dog fight indeed. Tremendous action and great descriptive writing. A chapter to remember right there. Great job! - Jim

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Alison Bull's avatar

Thank you, Jim!

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Jim J Wilsky's avatar

Really, really enjoyed it.

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Annie Blackwell's avatar

Oooh! I love the tension. Clever escape. Very well done, Alison. My first read of the morning, and it has me raring to go!

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Alison Bull's avatar

Thank you, Annie! I’m catching up on your story today!

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Richard Ritenbaugh's avatar

Excellent episode! Great action sequence! It's great to see a baddie get his due.

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